WEBSITE: Needs a much stronger sense of branding. Top banner helps. The record player gif works well, use gifs on other pages? (there is 1 more) Text overall: multiple fonts, including those with template – no sense of branding. Often white which is then very hard to read. No social media content. Shop – surely a vinyl record given the gif? Multiple fonts used again: this is possible, but you’d need to find an existing example to justify this or it will seem odd (branding). T-shirts etc: size? You can put large only. Music – make song titles visible! Get rid of placeholder and use reviews: short quotes, magazine (etc) mastheads, star ratings. Have you counted up album’s running time? Probably over 74 minutes (typical CD limit)? Gallery: hover text to explain what/where/when? Tour = Live? Dates in future not past!!! Link to venue. At top sample quotes from live reviews? About: very dry – you’ve got to entertain your youth audience. Maybe approach it as interviewing himself – or questions via twitter followers? Home: doesn’t add anything: just a click to enter, and remove from top links?
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ReplyDeleteNeeds a much stronger sense of branding. Top banner helps.
The record player gif works well, use gifs on other pages? (there is 1 more)
Text overall: multiple fonts, including those with template – no sense of branding. Often white which is then very hard to read.
No social media content.
Shop – surely a vinyl record given the gif? Multiple fonts used again: this is possible, but you’d need to find an existing example to justify this or it will seem odd (branding). T-shirts etc: size? You can put large only.
Music – make song titles visible! Get rid of placeholder and use reviews: short quotes, magazine (etc) mastheads, star ratings. Have you counted up album’s running time? Probably over 74 minutes (typical CD limit)?
Gallery: hover text to explain what/where/when?
Tour = Live? Dates in future not past!!! Link to venue. At top sample quotes from live reviews?
About: very dry – you’ve got to entertain your youth audience. Maybe approach it as interviewing himself – or questions via twitter followers?
Home: doesn’t add anything: just a click to enter, and remove from top links?